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Letters to Elected Officials - The Dragon's Mortal Morsel
I don't bite... much
kendaer
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Letters to Elected Officials
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darenye From: darenye Date: February 25th, 2004 10:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
*claps* but maybe you want to change "I do have issues when..." to "However, I do have problems with..." so that it is a little less repedative, and harder for their poor overworked brains to switch around, taking out, or adding in nots.
Linden
kendaer From: kendaer Date: February 25th, 2004 10:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
*grin* Yeah, that probably would improve it slightly, but since I've already sent the letter, all I can hope is that anyone else who uses my letter as a template takes your comments into consideration :)
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